Haiku Redo 37-40

Emerald Dream

Amber strands of hair

eyes as green as emeralds

was she but a dream

Hungry Crow

Waiting patiently

a hungry crow stalked his meal

this bird brain has a brain

Hello  Souls

Down a boulevard

walking strangers and lost souls

no one said hello

Streets

Busy city streets

intersections, lights and signs

moving, stop and go

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4 thoughts on “Haiku Redo 37-40

    1. Thanks Dean. I should have answered sooner. You always have a way of understanding my intentions, most of the time I don’t know if the connection is clear enough. After re-reading the page I had to correct the crow one, I meant staked, not stake, and I stole what you suggested. I think it sounds better. I’m still not sure about the contractions though. I am finding conflicting rules.

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